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[This scene takes place in the Mind’s Quill office. Neelkanth finishes reading the first draft of Rohan’s next novel.]
I think you need to take a break. I don’t know what exactly happened to you but whatever you are going through is impacting your writing! This poronographic story where the heroine dies in the end for no reason is an abomination. Forget the soul, the body of this story is even deformed.